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Hey everybody,


I'll start by saying I've only recently signed up for Book Group Online, and I'll be honest, I'm trying to take a shot at marketing my new book somewhere effective. Though I have to admit I'd love to spend more time here in general.


My name is Duncan John Reyneke. I'm a long time reader who actually works as an advertising writer as a job. I'm a sucker fo science fiction and big plot twists, horror fiction, speculative and absurdist stuff.


I've only recently started listening to a lot of Stephen King audiobooks. I also love Murakami, Irvine Welsh, Lauren Beukes, Chuck P,  and many others I'll probably be embarrassed I forgot later on.


As I mentioned, I recently published my second book, called "Bay City Monsters", about a hotel concierge who falls for a girl on the run from the forces of hell. It's a dark comedy horror fiction book, full of sex, violence, demons and video games. 


It's available on Amazon, as a Kindle or paperback.

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Welcome to BGO, Duncan.

This is a readers group, and while members can promote their own work here, it is  not the most effective site for promotion and marketing, as the active membership is quite small. However, you may post something about your book in "Writers' Corner, which is the area speifically for discussing members writings. However, links to sales sites atr not allowed unless you use our Amazon hyperlink.

I look forward to seeing your contributions to the SciFi threads, and those of other genres you are reading. You will find various Steven King books discussed here.

megustaleer (moderator)

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